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Broken eyes shining through a layer of bruisesMy bones leave marks wherever I goViolets line my pale pale skinAnd I am slipping through the vents trying to get your attentionIf I cut this piece in...
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you wrote that like the slippery side of a mountainI couldn't stop until I hit the bottomgood readdavid
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your reply made me smile...thank you for reading my piece...i am glad you enjoyed it
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a powerful and sad depiction of a serious problem, ophelia ... very well done ... but very sad ...They flutter behind you, your possible pasts ... some brighteyed and crazy, some frightened and lost....
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Feeling thinner and thinner...stretched to breaking point...disorders hidden beneath baggy clothing...and yet, the eyes will give it all away......as Beth says, a serious problem...this sounds like an...
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thank you, Just A Mona Lisa...*nods* definately a sad and serious problem...thank you for your wordsyou definately pin-pointed everything, Soulsease...more than you know...and you, as well as beth,...
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That piece pulled me along. It was a very vivid, and beautifully written. I enjoyed it very much. ~sun~
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thank you, Sun...i am glad you enjoyed the piece...thank you, again...your words mean a lot
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